VN Ren'Py DESIRIUM [v0.1] [ElCharlo]

[Itsphred]

Well fuck me.....never covered Socrate in my school days

I think the Dev actually made it so we get it wrong regardless lol

 

[Ish910]

I think the Dev actually made it so we get it wrong regardless lol

i saw one of his replies in the comments saying something about getting the right answer but honestly idk if it's already implemented or he's working on it.

 

[duyhung25]

anyone know the right answer in class ?

 

[ElCharlo]

i saw one of his replies in the comments saying something about getting the right answer but honestly idk if it's already implemented or he's working on it.

It will be implemented in the next update.

anyone know the right answer in class ?

There is currently no way to get the right answer. Which is a problem lol

 

[as22]

The games "not bad" but it lacks any drama suspense or internal conflict from the MC. He has nothing to lose and the females are written to like him from the start. Not exactly riveting stuff here.

It would have been MUCH better if the MC was already going out with a girl back home, and she was introduced to the readers at the start briefly. After this, the two sisters start to seduce the MC knowing this fact. Him and we the readers have to choose between staying faithful or cheating with the two hot sisters. This then leads to a relationship as they begin to like him more and more.

This would make the game that much more interesting than the generic: Go to homestay > the daughters are hot > they fall in love with the MC instantly > the end.

 

[ElCharlo]

The games "not bad" but it lacks any drama suspense or internal conflict from the MC. He has nothing to lose and the females are written to like him from the start. Not exactly riveting stuff here.

It would have been MUCH better if the MC was already going out with a girl back home, and she was introduced to the readers at the start briefly. After this, the two sisters start to seduce the MC knowing this fact. Him and we the readers have to choose between staying faithful or cheating with the two hot sisters. This then leads to a relationship as they begin to like him more and more.

This would make the game that much more interesting than the generic: Go to homestay > the daughters are hot > they fall in love with the MC instantly > the end.

I understand the lack of "nothing to lose" part, but with your example, absolutely no one would choose to stay faithful to the girlfriend back home, especially if she was introduced briefly. Nobody would care about her.

I have other plans for the dramatic part, but it will come later, when the player will be closer to the girls and actually care about them.

 

[BlasKyau]

The games "not bad" but it lacks any drama suspense or internal conflict from the MC. He has nothing to lose and the females are written to like him from the start. Not exactly riveting stuff here.

It would have been MUCH better if the MC was already going out with a girl back home, and she was introduced to the readers at the start briefly. After this, the two sisters start to seduce the MC knowing this fact. Him and we the readers have to choose between staying faithful or cheating with the two hot sisters. This then leads to a relationship as they begin to like him more and more.

This would make the game that much more interesting than the generic: Go to homestay > the daughters are hot > they fall in love with the MC instantly > the end.

This is a harem game, so of course my MC will have a romance with both sisters. And if the MC has a girlfriend back home, she should accept it or else leave. I don't see the moral conflict anywhere.

I understand the lack of "nothing to lose" part, but with your example, absolutely no one would choose to stay faithful to the girlfriend back home, especially if she was introduced briefly. Nobody would care about her.

I have other plans for the dramatic part, but it will come later, when the player will be closer to the girls and actually care about them.

As long as it doesn't involve choosing between LIs, death of LIs, blackmail or similar, then it's fine.

 

[FalconLover420]

It will be implemented in the next update.



There is currently no way to get the right answer. Which is a problem lol

wait, I busted out my college socrates notes for nothing D: lol

 

[galinadubslave]

When the next update?

 

[lardtree90]

Off to a great start, models and animations look great (though the MC has a bad case of baby face). Looking forward to next updates, hope we aren't waiting too long.

 

[logor23]

Solid first release, congrats! Will be following this game going forward. As for the criticisms, I'm hoping for a bit less nervous laughters in the dialogues (my brother does this and it's driving me nuts) and less emphasis on the MC's face (self-insert ? ), but otherwise not much else to say so far. Hope you can stay focused!

 

[ElCharlo]

When the next update?

Somewhere around October, because I want to try monthly updates.

 

[Manster1775]

It will be implemented in the next update.



There is currently no way to get the right answer. Which is a problem lol

Nice to see you will make it to where you can get it correct. I took Philosophy in college, so not being able to get that correct irked me. lol Other than that, I'm a fan.

 

[FalconLover420]

Yeah patreon is weird as hell when it comes to their own rules lmao
I only mentioned sleep sex specifically because it's the one thing I know they consistently will temp ban someone for having in their game.

Nah man sleep sex for the win, I believe in the dev

 

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[ElCharlo]

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[Gorse]

Eventually, here are some FAN SIGs for DESIRIUM - as requested by ElCharlo in the GFX Request Thread:

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Whether you have desire or not: by using these Sigs in your personal signature ...​

... you might even support the game & the dev a wee bit !​

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And ElCharlo : thanks for your game & good fortune with the future development! All the best & fingers crossed!

 

[FreshRevenge]

I think the Dev actually made it so we get it wrong regardless lol

What kind of questions is this. I was looking all over the place to find this answer. Having a history or even philosophical question right off the bat.

Well fuck me.....never covered Socrate in my school days

LIterally I was stuck on one quetion before advancing the story. Look for anything online to give a history lesson on Socrates.

 

[Zap Masters]

5th photo looks like Nora from Away From Home she is so hot milf

 

[Kasoklar]

You got it all perfectly right, thanks. About Ms. Reed, many comments have convinced me to redo that scene to make it more realistic (meaning you can have the right answers). I can redo it because it doesn't affect the rest of her storyline I had planned. Many people called her a psycho and I have to agree, it did feel like it because of that scene, even though she's not supposed to be one.


Now, I want to make clarifications about some stuff, after reading every single comment.

-First off, the malware issue. I saw a comment it could be a false positive due to the custom .icon for the game. I don't really know what to tell you guys except that there is no virus in the file, lol.

-There seems to be some confusion about the future tags. All kinks will be avoidable/optional or whatever you want to call it. To make it even clearer, here is the current list of those (kinks I consider most people care about): Anal sex, Blackmail, Corruption, Creampie, Exhibitionism, Group sex, Groping, Harem, Lesbian. Also, some of the harder-to-implement kinks are limited to some characters. For example, you won't be able to corrupt or blackmail every character.

-Which brings me to my next point about the femdom confusion:



Fuck whatever is that up there, I almost puked the cereals I had this morning just thinking about it. As Gussifriz also said: "taking the lead and initiative of pleasuring you while you don't necessarily feel helpless" would be more accurate to my version of light female domination I could include in the game. Nothing too crazy that would make you want to ditch the girl.

-I will definitely add an option to enable/disable custom save names, I didn't realize this could be annoying to some.



I might have forgot some clarifications, don't hesitate to ask more questions. And one last thing... I hate to bring this up because money was not my first motivation making this game, but I was wondering why I didn't get more support on Patreon? Two chads have subscribed in a total of 6000-7000+ , even though I believe this is an acceptable first release with overall good feedback. I was just comparing myself to

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(and other people doing first releases), who got 244 paid members and making $1000+ CAD a month with a first release on F95 on August 23rd. A first release with 20 minutes of content, by the way. He has insanely good renders that are much better than mine since I'm not using DAZ, true, but overall more negative feedback than DESIRIUM (story-wise, grammar-wise, characters talking like bots with no emotions, etc.)

I'm genuinely curious to know what causes this. Too expensive subscriptions? Not enough content? VaM renders are not most people's style (even though I didn't really see any complaints about this, I saw the opposite instead)? Is good DAZ renders all it takes? Again, I feel like an asshole doing this comparison with Waifuz Studio's instant success and bringing this up is probably retarded, but I'd really appreciate some enlightenment here... Thank you guys.

Hey brother. Some kind words about your question regarding the money:

To me it's the same with every other thing in the world. Mainstream music, sugar, fast food, porn, basically anything. Taking pop music, it's not bad, it's just using a much used-before groove and sometimes slightly altering it, slightly deepening it or making it only slightly better.
Most pop music sounds great and fresh right off the bat, but then when you listen to a lot of it, it all starts to sound the same very quickly, because it's all build from the same patterns, the same tricks in high quality production, the same ideas with slight twists, and usually made to cater to as many people as possible and sell quickly.
As soon as you divert a little too much from this groove, or path, less people listen to it because they don't recognize it as what they know, or they just don't find it as easily, or they can't fit it into their idea of what they usually like, or it doesn't go down without chewing properly.
A lot of the time, these things are also pretty one dimensional and short lived. You may listen to your favorite song many times because it's literally build to stimulate your dopamine as much as possible, but it won't blow your mind or make a deep expanding impact.
Sugar hits pretty hard but it's not enriching, nourishing, long lasting or satisfying.

Finding hidden gems where people put their soul, emotion, care, boldness and personality into the songs has so much more depth and can make me feel so much more + literally change me by showing me a reflection of me inside that person's genuine creativity rather than forcing the creation of something that will stimulate, or even just reach, the most amount of people.

If I may give you some reassurance: To me you are part of the hidden gems here. It doesn't matter what the exact lines are, or getting too precise with how everything fits together, or how their faces look (even though feedback can be a good tool sometimes). To me, I feel that you created this with a genuine appreciation and humble creativity wanting to give a life to a vision that made you feel joyful to imagine and bring into being. I feel as if there is a soulful presence emanating from somewhere "behind" or "on top" of the visuals and words itself. It just has character.

I'm not trying to overpraise or exaggerate on the quality here. I'm just stating a literal sensation I'm getting when I play this game. It's immersive and draws me in.
It seems like you had a genuine spark to create something personal here which I and others can feel. That just makes it more rare and less quick to catch attention from "the masses"

You could also see it this way: You have JUST released your game and you are already getting some super positive feedback and it seems like people are enjoying and recognizing the love you put into it. That's absolutely awesome and will take you a long way in the end probably! You will build a more dense following rather than a quick following. It could have gone a lot worse


Anyhows, have fun creating!